*** 3 bedpost stars ***
This is the first story I've read where it felt as if the prompt was written after the story was written. It wasn't of course. The author managed followed the prompt perfectly, writing the story exactly the way it was prompted. Kudos to the author! The promptee asked for "a hookup that sparks an unexpected connection between casual fuckbuddies as they discover that they are both much less vanilla than they've pretended to be in the past and more connected than they'd ever realized". And it really did! The story was good. I loved that Kai and Cole were good together and found out they could be even better together, even though they'd known each other as just fuck buddies for the last three years.
"What are you doing?" I stiffened, my post-climatic bliss dispersed by his out of character behavior.
"I'm holding you." Cole explained calmly, making me feel like an idiot. A panicky idiot.
"Why?" I almost squeaked.
"Because I want to."
The promptee also asked for "this story is really about coming out of the extreme buttsex/fetish?/BDSM? closet." And gosh, did the story do that.
Bed post ball, anyone?
"Listen to me, Kai. I want you to slowly move backwards, as if you're going to sit down, and when you touch the ball, position is right." (...)
"Beautiful. Do you feel it at your hole, is it cold?"
"Yes." He answered as he squirmed on it, slowly circling with his hips. (...)
His breathing increased as he took it all. He squirmed, moaned and whimpered and I knew it kept rubbing against his prostate, I felt it in the size of his cock in my mouth in the pulsing and twitching.
"Is it good?" I asked, with a smile on my lips.
"Yesss!" Kai hissed just before he moaned again.
Raise your hand if you thought it was hot.
You can ponder my level of pervyness later. :P
The scene was greatly written and it showed a connection and trust between the two MCs, and it wasn't downplayed or dirtied or sluttied, which would have put me off immediately. Whether it's totally safe is another matter, which I'm not going to ponder. I just enjoyed this little shorty.
A short story in the collection "Don't Read in the Closet, Volume Three" from the MM Romance Group Hot Summer Event 2011.
Click HERE for the story online or HERE to download the whole collection for your reading device.
Picture and prompt:
Dear brave author and concomitant Muse,
Because I think some Love can get extreme and there are all kinds of closets... :) I'd like you to consider this odd moment from a sweet, raunchy story, a wacky meet-cute between two fellas who have known each other for years yet not known each other at all...
Yowza. :) My sense is that this is a random hookup that sparks an unexpected connection between casual fuckbuddies as they discover that they are both much less vanilla than they've pretended to be in the past and more connected than they'd ever realized. Could be coworkers or neighbors or simply acquaintances with benefits.
Either or both of these guys may start out closeted about being gay, but this story is really about coming out of the extreme buttsex/fetish?/BDSM? closet and ultimately the ready for real commitment closet.
Here's the twist: this should be ultimately a sweet story, not just raunchy porno hookup with numbers exchanged for subsequent boning. Expectations should be reversed on both sides over the course of time (a night?) together as these guys get past bland hokey-pokey, past spit-on-me and stuff-furniture-into-that-ass, to something tender and hopeful and fragile that stuns them into happily ever after closure. Raunch is great, but it's the meaningful connection that they're after. Surprise them and us! :)
Can you dig it?
Tags: friends to lovers, bdsm, dirty talk, bondage, sex games, blue collar
Content warning: Sex with furniture is possible