If One Dream Should Fall and Break

If One Dream Should Fall and Break - Angel Martinez

*** 3 reunited stars ***

An okay story about long lost friends/lovers, if not totally believable. Mal disappeared for five years and suddenly everything is lovey-dovey?! Cool paranormal elements, though.
And why did Mal insist on Jeremy coming out to his mother before coming with Mal? Coming out should be up to Jeremy and not as a stipulation for coming with Mal.

I had one highlighted sentence from this story:

The pillars of their erections rubbed together with such aching friction, Jeremy's spinning brain expected to see sparks.

I highly doubt your brain is spinning there, Jeremy. Metaphorically your thoughts might spin or you head might spin, but your brain? Uhm... no. 
Oh, and I totally googled: "pillars of erection". 'Cause you know, duh... ;)

Didn't expect to get a good laugh out of it! HAHAHA! 
(SFW, btw ;) lol)



A short story in the collection "Don't Read in the Closet, Volume Two" from the MM Romance Group Hot Summer Event 2011.

Click HERE for the story online or  HERE to download the whole collection for your reading device.

Picture and prompt:

Dear Author, 

These boys were best friends growing up and then 5 years ago they got separated when one of them moved away. They've just unexpectedly reunited in this small town diner somewhere in the Northeast. Based on this picture it looks like their accidental meeting is turning into something more than just childhood best friends running into each other later in life. 

Please give these cute boys a happy ever after ending. 



Genre: Science Fiction 

Tags: reunited, interspecies, in the closet, friends to lovers