Sideline Submission

Sideline Submission - Kora Knight

************** a million stars ********************
FRISKY FRIDAY NOVEMBER 21.




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"Don't go there," he whispered, burying his face in Tad's neck. "Not back where you were. Not when I just got you out."
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Kora, honey. *looks at you seriously*
This was fucking magnificent. Hands down. I loved it. Pure and simple. I felt it.

I could fill this review with drool worthy pics and gifs, but damn, you have me in tears, woman! Tears, I tell you!

This is exactly the type of story I utterly love. Play by play, really "zoomed in" on the characters, small gestures, touches and words revealing so much, smokin' hot, yet tender.


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"But what if I've already fallen?"
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"H-h-holy f-fuck!" Squirming in Scott's hold, he struggled not to come. The bastard just kept snickering and kept on going.
"G-g-goddamn it," Tad laughed. "Why d-d-does everything you do f-f-feel so fucking good?"

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It really was. It f-f-felt so fucking good.

Having Tad and Scott in the situation in the story, having them play off it like that, was a stroke of genius. And beautifully told.
The story, the characters (all four of them!), the descriptions, the push and pull, Tad's stubborn, yet scared indecision, Scott's playful, yet demanding, yet fragile being, their words, the illustrative words (like *smack)...
Just the pace of your writing and the jump between inside and outside of the glass.


I am blown away.




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"Awe, babe," Scott murmured. "My bold and beautiful man..."
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It was off the chart hot, but what I'm left with is feels!
I left my hear in this book.






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Reading updates:

1%
I'm horny ready!!
#wine #porn #BPR





9%
Tad's heart gave his ribcage a happy kick as those stupid fucking fluttery things roared back to like.

I love your descriptions, Kora!



12%
Dark washed denim sat low on Scott's hips, encasing strong thighs and chiseled calves--and every other place that counted. Damn, the dude could rock a pair of jeans.



45%
"Earth to Tad? You still with me?"
Tad blinked, heat rushing to his cheeks."Uh....yeah," he chuckled. "Was just... uh..."
CRACK!



57%
Tad exhaled hard, tamping back a groan. He'd been holding his breath and hadn't even realized it, so morbidly transfixed(...)

Uh-huh!



58%
He glanced at Scott. Instantly the dude met his gaze, the fire in his eyes nearly knocking Tad off his feet. Restless, starving, barely contained desire. Whatever he was thinking about, it was seriously getting him worked up. And fuck, did he wear hot-and-bothered well.

I'm loving this! Oh, Scott!



75%
"H-h-holy f-fuck!" Squirming in Scott's hold, he struggled not to come. The bastard just kept snickering and kept on going. "G-g-goddamn it," Tad laughed. "Why d-d-does everything you do f-f-feel so fucking good?"





77%
(...) it wasn't so much about the physical contact as it was about the connection. (...) Because Scott lit his insides like nobody else. And Tad wasn't just referring to just his groin. The guy sparked an odd kind of sunlight in his chest. Those big warm eyes, that great fucking smile.

Awwww...




86%
"Don't go there," he whispered, burying his face in Tad's neck. "Not back where you were. Not when I just got you out."
Tad could feel Scott's eyelashes against his skin, felt the moment they slowly closed.
"Just... say that you missed me... like I missed you."





88%
He showed his index into Tad's mouth. "But no more small talk." His finger salaciously stroked Tad's mouth. "Suck me while I'm fucking you. Pretend it's my dick. Wanna feel how you'd try to make me come."

GAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!




95%
"Awe, babe," Scott murmured. "My bold and beautiful man..."